Page 16, still nothing particularly sexy or sexual beyond some casual nudity, and I’m still not sure what or who the hell this comic is about. I’d love to see the outline for this one. Is each page even supposed to be related in any way to the one before it?
@Aviya – How incredibly rude. Do you go to concerts and boo the musicians too? It’s free art, if you don’t like it, there’s literally millions of other places to get your porn fix.
@D So because its free people cant criticize it? This is a terrible argument. Being free does not exclude something from any criticism, also technically this isn’t free, patreon supporters are paying to help make this. I find nothing wrong with this comic so far, and think it’s fantastic, –
You can criticize. Just don’t be rude, it’s free. It’s a tone issue. Some people don’t understand it and that’s ok. They are just doomed to be misunderstood or seen as rude. That’s life, no?
It’s not a question of “can or can’t.” Same way you can still go to a show and boo the performers. It’s rude and unkind. They’re the vulnerable ones on stage trying their best to do something for the crowd. Imagine how you would feel. This is the closest thing there is to a “stage” for this art.
It’s one thing to whisper to your friend that you don’t like the song/performance (and that would be like discussing art on an image board). But this is Doxy’s stage, and it must feel like shit to get that kind of feedback. Just don’t be a dick, guys.
Doxy said this comic would be light on porn from the beginning, quote “so sorry if you’re just looking for a quick fap” on the first page. I really like this comic, the art is beautiful and I love the blue tone. It’s okay that this one doesn’t have a lot of sex, I like it the way it is.
Personally speaking here, I can see how some people could be wanting sexual activity because that’s mainly how Doxy does to my knowledge, but to say that Aviya’s statement/question is rude, is a rude statement in itself. Anything is open to criticism, regardless of a price or lack thereof. As far as it must feel like shit to be critiqued, I personally run my own YouTube channel and when and if I ever get enough views to get comments, if their positive, cool. If it’s rational negativity or a critique/feedback, I’ll look at it and try to take it into consideration in future videos to help myself grow. And then we all have the trolls that are rude just to be rude. Don’t feed into that. Anyways… there was nothing rude about what was said up until the point where the accusation of them being rude was made. The accusation was rude, not the original statement. And then it was kinda meh from there. Also, everyone could have just hit the reply button and this would have been mire organized
While im not going to put it like aviya did, this is a pretty flawed comic. Even putting pacing aside bc fine if he wants to focus more on slow burn with this then thats great. But even storywise, its sometimes impossible to even understand whats going on with the plot. The character designs fluctuate rapadily for little to no reason, the sketchy art style sometines looks too unpolished and rushed sometimes, and overall i rhink its brining home the frustation many people are having with this being a nigh dead site except for when this updates, which could go for strechs of nearly a month between pages.
All things aside, can we please stop making this a discourse site? I kniw ive contributed some but its a porn site god sakes. If you dont like it, then dont come here. Ill be trying to take that advice and i think yall should try abd be a little less negative in general.
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Page 16, still nothing particularly sexy or sexual beyond some casual nudity, and I’m still not sure what or who the hell this comic is about. I’d love to see the outline for this one. Is each page even supposed to be related in any way to the one before it?
@Aviya – How incredibly rude. Do you go to concerts and boo the musicians too? It’s free art, if you don’t like it, there’s literally millions of other places to get your porn fix.
@D So because its free people cant criticize it? This is a terrible argument. Being free does not exclude something from any criticism, also technically this isn’t free, patreon supporters are paying to help make this. I find nothing wrong with this comic so far, and think it’s fantastic, –
You can criticize. Just don’t be rude, it’s free. It’s a tone issue. Some people don’t understand it and that’s ok. They are just doomed to be misunderstood or seen as rude. That’s life, no?
It’s not a question of “can or can’t.” Same way you can still go to a show and boo the performers. It’s rude and unkind. They’re the vulnerable ones on stage trying their best to do something for the crowd. Imagine how you would feel. This is the closest thing there is to a “stage” for this art.
It’s one thing to whisper to your friend that you don’t like the song/performance (and that would be like discussing art on an image board). But this is Doxy’s stage, and it must feel like shit to get that kind of feedback. Just don’t be a dick, guys.
Doxy said this comic would be light on porn from the beginning, quote “so sorry if you’re just looking for a quick fap” on the first page. I really like this comic, the art is beautiful and I love the blue tone. It’s okay that this one doesn’t have a lot of sex, I like it the way it is.
Personally speaking here, I can see how some people could be wanting sexual activity because that’s mainly how Doxy does to my knowledge, but to say that Aviya’s statement/question is rude, is a rude statement in itself. Anything is open to criticism, regardless of a price or lack thereof. As far as it must feel like shit to be critiqued, I personally run my own YouTube channel and when and if I ever get enough views to get comments, if their positive, cool. If it’s rational negativity or a critique/feedback, I’ll look at it and try to take it into consideration in future videos to help myself grow. And then we all have the trolls that are rude just to be rude. Don’t feed into that. Anyways… there was nothing rude about what was said up until the point where the accusation of them being rude was made. The accusation was rude, not the original statement. And then it was kinda meh from there. Also, everyone could have just hit the reply button and this would have been mire organized
While im not going to put it like aviya did, this is a pretty flawed comic. Even putting pacing aside bc fine if he wants to focus more on slow burn with this then thats great. But even storywise, its sometimes impossible to even understand whats going on with the plot. The character designs fluctuate rapadily for little to no reason, the sketchy art style sometines looks too unpolished and rushed sometimes, and overall i rhink its brining home the frustation many people are having with this being a nigh dead site except for when this updates, which could go for strechs of nearly a month between pages.
All things aside, can we please stop making this a discourse site? I kniw ive contributed some but its a porn site god sakes. If you dont like it, then dont come here. Ill be trying to take that advice and i think yall should try abd be a little less negative in general.