I hate to say it, but I feel the same about the art… In an attempt to be constructive, I think it has to do with the thick outlines, which seem to over-simplify the gals’ bodies, and how the shading connects from one plane to the next. Actually, the light source seems to be off from panel to panel. But that could be a stylistic thing. All thatbeing said, I really, really like the middle panel on this one. T’is gorgeous. Also the little detail of hearts in her eyes is a nice touch.
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Man, must as I like the concept, the art has taken a nose dive since page 7. That’s really a damn shame.
The art isnt really doing it for me anymore
I hate to say it, but I feel the same about the art… In an attempt to be constructive, I think it has to do with the thick outlines, which seem to over-simplify the gals’ bodies, and how the shading connects from one plane to the next. Actually, the light source seems to be off from panel to panel. But that could be a stylistic thing. All thatbeing said, I really, really like the middle panel on this one. T’is gorgeous. Also the little detail of hearts in her eyes is a nice touch.